The nemesis sample( what i have so far) contructive critisicm is apreciated.

A gist about the nemesis is a god whose goal is to kill as much of the worshipers of other gods and to make them, (the other gods), powerless so he, (the evil god), able to take control. The EG (evil god) reside in a body of a prince who later became the king. Soon after the coronation and being the next king the EG took over the man’s body and soon after began to wage war with every nation. In the latter fights we need to kill the man 2x to force the EG out of the man’s body and kill him with a bestowed weapon which is from any of the other gods (a total of 3 of them at least). Thus the group would have to get the boon from the other gods to kill him. Which requires you to be involved in quests.